Sunday, 6 November 2011

Goldilocks and the three bears.

an ashen grey sky loomed over the house as the bears sat around looking intently at their burning porridge. it was papa bear who decided that they should walk until it cooled. they began walking and they walk over the hills through the valleys on they are going to walk. it was then that goldilocks chanced upon the house. she asked goldilocks if they should go in and lured by the smell they were driven inside. it was dark there seemed however to be a dull glow emanating from the adjoining room. goldilocks began to whimper as a fear set in she turned to goldilocks.
 i'm scared. 
you're always scared
why do you have to be so evil?
what are you talking about, im you, you're the evil one.
okay
she turned back to the door and walked though. the cinders of a recent fire allowed the room to be viewed by goldilocks who saw the porridge and stood stunned.
what are you doing?
it could be a trap.
hurry or we'll be caught.
okay.
okay.
she went to the first bowl and spooned a small amount into her mouth. it was rancid with salt. she then tried the second bowl and heaved at the sugary sweetness. the third bowl was just right and she ate eating the porridge with a frenzied hunger. once gorged she thought she had better rest and so she climbed the stairs finding a room with three beds. the first so large it seemed to engulf a portion of the world and make the floor sag under its girth. the second had no visible pillows and so goldilocks approached the third. as she made her way towards it goldilocks began to protest.
im scared. this isnt safe.
i know we'll go.
but they didnt leave instead they lay uon the bed and drifted to sleep dreaming of evil thing lurking in the house and a terrible roar as a torrent of water shook the house to its core. startled she awoke to find a terrible bear looming over her and in one moment she began to run around the bed down the stairs through the dinning room they ran shouting at one another.     
    

1 comment:

  1. Callum. You are falling behind once again. Everything taught in class must go on here.

    You have until Wednesday evening to catch up or you'll be asked to leave class.

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